高中英语新高考-英语作文：如何选用正确短语词组写作文

我今天给同学们带来了一张写作助记卡。

作文题

阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150字左右的英语短文。

Should parents leave all of their money to children and let them live a carefree life without even the necessity of earning money to support themselves? Here are two pieces of news about two celebrities:

Bill Gates: Bill Gates has promised to give all of his $ 58 billion fortune to charity he has set up with his wife, The Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation, which funds health and education projects around the world. He wanted to make a positive contribution to the world.

Zuckerberg: We will give 99% of our Facebook shares during our lives to advance human potential and promote equality. We know this is a small contribution compared to all the resources and talents of those already working on these issues. But we want to do what we can, working alongside many others.

Many world-famous wealthy businessmen choose to donate almost all of their possessions to the charity instead of leaving their fortune to their children. In their opinion, it is better to develop the quality of independence of their children, making them possess the competence of living by themselves.

【写作内容】

1. 以约30个词概括上述材料的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词谈谈你对“授之以鱼，授之以渔”的看法，内容包括：

⑴ 你是否赞同这些名人的做法以及你的理由；

⑵ 请你就父母如何培养孩子的性方面，谈谈你的看法。

写作思路

概括：

第一段提出问题，接下来举例，最后一段才是总结。因此重点看最后一段。

Many world-famous wealthy businessmen choose to donate almost all of their possessions to the charity instead of leaving their fortune to their children. In their opinion, it is better to develop the quality of independence of their children, making them possess the competence of living by themselves.

这段只需要改写一下，因为它本身就是大意了。

Some celebrities choose to donate almost all of their possessions to the charity to encourage their children to be independent and be able to support themselves.

你的看法：谈原因（从正反两个方面）：

1.不好的方面：滋生孩子的懒惰

2.好的方面：鼓励孩子自主，对社会做出贡献

如何处理：(从父母和孩子两个方面）

1.父母：不要溺爱（spoil）；给孩子机会；提供一些必要的建议；倾听孩子

2.孩子：学会处理解决困难；学会和别人相处，利用团队的力量

这里面要用到\"影响、不利、有助于”等词块，不用着急，直接从助记卡里挑选。

足够用的常用高级词组 5挑战

pose a challenge to sb提出挑战

face a challenge面对挑战

take / accept a challenge接受挑战 8作用

play a(n) central / crucial / important / key / leading role insth.在……扮演重要/主要角色

10问题

give rise to / create / pose / cause the problem造成问题

address / fix / solve / handle / settle / cope with / deal withthe problem解决问题

pose a threat to对……造成威胁

9影响

have (a) negative / positive effects / impacts on sth.对……产生正面 / 负面影响

weigh against sb对……有不利的影响

interfere with one’s study / rest / the development / progress对某人的学习/休息/发展/进步有影响

11促进

promote the development / mutual understanding / health促进发展/相互理解/健康

serve as (be) the catalyst for the development / growth对发展起到促进作用

further one’s career / cultural exchanges / interests促进事业/文化交流/兴趣

12有助于

contribute much/little/greatly to a better understanding of / thepopularity of / the growth of（非常/几乎不）有助于更好理解/流行/增长

facilitate the mastery / the solution to有助掌握/解决

go a long way to(towards) solving the problem / easing fears有助于解决问题/缓解恐惧 19好坏

benefit from sth./ doing sth.从……当中获益

do good to sth.对某事有好处

be harmful to 对……有害（to为介词）

正文：

I applaud those celebrities’ decision. Those with everything prepared by their parents tend to lose the drive to pursue their goals. This is because it will give rise to laziness and pose a great threat to their psychological development. On the other hand, such behavior plays acrucial role in awakening their sympathy and motivate them to contribute to society.

So it is unwise of parents to spoil their children. Instead, they should give children more opportunities to develop their potential. Even some practical advice can help. Besides, parents should make it a habit to listen to their children. What they need, most of time, is emotional support rather than physical wealth. Only by doing so can children handle what comes in the way independently and shoulder due responsibility in the future.